Todays one is a little more confusing

Similar to what we talked about yesterday

We need to make it clear in the first few seconds who the website is actually for

As a first time viewer, I get the impression that it’s all about you and no real talk about who specifically you work with.

There is no pictures of clients on the home page and no real guidance on the flow of the website.

Which then leaves you with the decision of do you try and navigate yourself around or leave and increase your bounce rate.

The home page is key to keeping people to want to stay, use it a brief overview to the whole site

Next we move on to the power of the copy on the services page

We need to be talking to the viewer about them and their struggles and not about what’s included

For example the 1-2-1 option could be positioned as the premium service that helps you drop as much as 1.5 stone in just 30 days.

If you wanted to included what is included, then we need to make them more punchy

You will receive 2 leg toning, belly tightening workouts per week that are designed to drop fat and boost energy

Then we support you with your nutrition, giving you quick and easy recipes not only help to get you back into those jeans but also that even the fussiest child will love

REMEMBER.. Talk to their wants & needs

The more we talk to their wants and needs the more they are getting pulled in to your offer

David 

On a side note:

Social button at the bottom don’t link anywhere

Remove the dates from the blogs so it’s nobody knows when they are published and if you have not done anything for a while